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reminds me of picture i saw of the hiroshima victims
freaky and disturbing
if you wanna finish it, im thinking you could put in a slow bassy cresc toward teh end at the end of wich the whole song convulses in an ugly way and then dies. thats jus a thought
check out my sone "eyes of the waiting" if you have time.... its also creepy
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Hey man thanks for the review. I will check your song out now!
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sounds pretty haunting, especially while reading your poetic authour comment
so this is what i propose as an idea
you record your voice saying that and put it over the song with some gentle reverbs or something would add to the emotion of it.
and make it longer because something thats good like this should be imho
-Deathkavaderva
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ive heard this like, 2 days ago and almost reviewed it askin YOU to listen to my song. and that bitch swirly helix! he stole my phrase "smooth as PISS" when i reviewed his thing. serious. since for some reason my browser is fucking up and not playing this atm, from memory i can tell you this was as BRUTAL AS A FUCKIN BLOODY DIARHOREEA or how ever you spell it
Author's Response:
Oh wow thanks man! I'll have to check out some of your stuff soon.
Thanks for the review bro
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that lead that comes in at :38 would sound nicer with panning, like if it drifts from one ear 2 the other continuously. thats just an idea i get from hearing this. its a little loud, but the song still sounds cool. could have a better ending though. nice beats.
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i really havent played around with panning at all. ive pretty much completely overlooked that. i think i'll try to utilize that in future tracks
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at the beginning its kinda slow but @ 40:00 when the sax comes in everything is smooth as piss. the beats are seamless with all the other sounds. another 30 seconds and i would have had time to cream :( oh well some other time maybe. gotta love dnb jazz.
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YESYESYES!
I'm glad you liked it, spent quite the hours just making it sounds real. :D:D
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you can go around hearing some pretty good classical music and think its great until you hear this and all the other crap is blown away. reminds you of how beethoven and all them other freakin geniuses were like back in the day.
superior.
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i was thinking it was gonna build up to something massive an epic but then i saw it sonly 1:27. this is really disappointing, but only because the quality of this is so good.
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i dont usually listen tto or make this kind of music so i cant really say much, but i can say it sounds cool and has catchy tune, all the sounds work well together. i reckon the score deserves to be more like a 4 something than a 2 somethin so i voted 5 (3.02 / 5.00 (+ 0.14)
peace
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Thanks a lot!
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because there isnt a definite form to the song (intro, main theme, breakdown, theme again etc) the whole thing will end up sounding like a big long intro and won't get anwhere. not using presets and all them fl drum samples like everyone else will give your music a unique sound which is better. One thing to add: in the bit where the snare comes in the beats seem random and should probably hold a stronger rhythm. i no i do that sometimes with drums. so its not bad but can be made much better.
-Deathkavaderva
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yeh cheers, i c wat u mean
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i always thought that the most important part of music is to inspire some sort of emotion in the listener. i found this song calming, yet uplifting and inspiring. some of the bassy notes were too heavy tho and i wasn't too hot for the way the volume raised again at the end but apart from that it was real good. check out my ambient stuff if you have the time. i hope you'll submit more stuff to ng.
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I'll take that into consideration - thanks for the review buddy.
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