Score: 3

""Eeh..." (end quote)"

submission: !Rampage!

date: October 6, 2007

Wasn't it just the same thing over and over and over and over and over again? I think you probably did not put much effort into this.

Score: 7

"not bad"

submission: [Kriz] - Frozen Breath

date: October 6, 2007

Had one foot in industrial the other in dance/techno which is not a bad thing in itself.
Had nice drums. I think the drums made it more industriallish with out them it would just be dance or techno.

Score: 8

"very atmospheric"

submission: .wrench.

date: October 5, 2007

would have been really fulfilling if it had some variation near the end. Nothing drastic- like instead of having B, f then e flat all the time have b, d then c.

Score: 6

"not bad"

submission: Shadow of light force

date: October 5, 2007

has a nice beat. Good for your first. I know I still have a lot to learn. you know I listened to this and What the Fuck at the same time (if you don't know it it's also on the audio portal) and they went perfectly together. Uncanny.

Score: 4

".........."

submission: All You Know is Burning

date: October 5, 2007

Dude hurry up with the high quality version. I can't even hear this one.

Score: 5

"........"

submission: Possesed

date: October 4, 2007

Extend this

Score: 8

"call me crazy"

submission: -Void-

date: October 4, 2007

But I really liked it. The factory noises or whatever they were were a good idea but they crackle in my head phones. Pretty random but I liked it all. I do not no y and I do not no why this is rated so poorly (actually I think I do) but I don't care.

Score: 6

"yes, um,"

submission: Apocalypse Come

date: October 4, 2007

The voices at the start sounded gay because they were soo fake (maybe increase attack or onset?)
It was pretty cool but I think you should definitely take the idea further. Extend it and reach a climax or something. And I didn't like the dancey beat coming in at 1:29 I think you should have stuck to those dark drums. If I were you I would probably make it into some epic massive shit but that is just me.
Suggestion: Add a church organ I love those.
Bye for now.

Score: 9

"hah"

submission: What The Fuck?

date: October 3, 2007

dude you should put a beat to it and make a song :D

Score: 6

"pretty good"

submission: Buired in Dust (2:48)

date: October 1, 2007

i thought it was a wack till that pad or whatever it was came in 1:05 but it is not bad. I think the fade out ending was dodgy. Also there wasn't that much of a melody to hold on to and wasn't very variant. Keep composing :)