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drums are good, they're kinda crazy and variate well. The fluency of the music can be improved though. Ways to do this are to add reverbs on some tracks that stick out at times like the lead to make it flow smoother. And then come up with a clear structure with a recurring theme and verses, and near the end, a climax or something. what the guys below said i agree with. and sure, we can be cyber buddes if you like.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/141780
my new song. njoy, and i hope you found that helpful.
Author's Response:
Reverb. Fluency. Structure. Climax. I'll work those into my song I'm working on right now. Thank you.
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agree with those two guys. This isn't techno. I have no idea what this is. The main theme is pretty good, but in the bits in between the lead just seems to go all over the place. If the verses were a little more ordered then it would sound better.
But better than the first. check out my stufff if you have the time
btw, I think this may have been attacked by 0 voters.
Author's Response:
thx i agree i dunno what style this is either.. i play jazz tho and a lot of that kind of spilled over into this..(not always working) but yea thx and i liked ur stuff too
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well it certainly deserves better then that crappy rating. Good tunes and shit its just a bit mudddy or something if instruments had more diverse spots in the panning spectrum itd be less cluttered
sry im a little tired
Author's Response:
no prob i didnt rly master this song i just impatient and posted it lol
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A bit repeditive, but the sounds you used were very trippy. Comes in with a nice, driving beat later on that ties it together more. What I would suggest for when you extend it is a change or two in chord progressions and beats, which would escalate the listener's interest.
-deathkavaderva-
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Sweet groove, great chord progressions and emotions. Like below said, it gives a deep sense of sadness but with an underlying feeling of hope. I feel like I'm floating underwater listening to this. It gradually builds up and holds the listener's attention very well. The only thing I can say against it is at 2:47 those vocals that come in didn't seem to fit there for a second. But that's not worth taking a point off for. This deserves the top 50 more than most of the crap on ng. Well done, you've moved me.
-deathkavaderva-
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got good melody, sounds like the title and everything which is good. The negatives for me are that in some parts it cracked in my head phones the mixing is a bit loud. Maybe try for some compression? Also I would have liked it better with some more percussion toward the end. peace
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it, I must agree with the loudness at times, its mainly the cause of Poizone's sound, which also added the swish noise, I will take what you said and put them into a more updated version of this song when I get the chance.
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This has been rated too low imo.... really it has.
yep. This is actually a badass showdown. I can see it all in my head.
Staring at eachother in the eye calmly seconds before they're about to rip into eachother with bullets....
Not speaking of effects put on it, it's fairly simple, and that's why I think it would work well in a flash, the tension slowly builds which is good and it loops well.
The drums at the start-- they got a bit of delay on em? Ah well suits. Can't really think of anything to criticise.
peace
Author's Response:
simplicity is what drives background music, glad I painted a picture for you, although take out the guns and put in swords, then you've got the film idea down.
The drums do have delay, sound more foreboding that way
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and you got the unique thing of the gameboy synth goin on, but I think maybe a more advanced kinda synth would serve you better. Maybe look into something like imposcar, I ussed it in my song retarded insanety. Stop by if you have the time.
peace
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really enjoyed those bigassed beats that were sometimes off-beat which made this song fun. And then you had all the synths all doin their thing on either side of my head, you have a good variety of sounds here that just go together real well. So here's the deal: I add this to my favourites, next month I download it. then I get a better internet plan :P.
But now I check out one of your other songs....
Author's Response:
thanks for the review buddeh
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I thought the plucked instrument (the guitar or lute or something) was a little heavy handed, and the high notes of the violins were a bit hard to bear but apart from that, very nice work. The sort of chords and harmonies you used sorta reminded me of Sword of Mana game.
One last thing- did you use classical vsts for this because I have none and consequentially am extremely limited if I try and do classical stuff. Just asking..
Author's Response:
Well, I wanted the guitar to sound heavy. There was no main instrument in this song. Just two dual ones in a whirling symphony of lost control. I didn't really use my head when I wrote this song; just my heart.
I actually used Fruityloops for this. =/ Sorry Charlie.
- Lady Arsenic <3
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