Deathkavaderva's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[dragonfruit]

"This fruit must be delicious."

Totally agree with that one man. This one is very original and creative! Nice tunes here make it fun to be hearing. Do what below said and also since this is a fast upbeat piece you might wanna mess around with panning so eg. in R i hear the bells doing their thing then an answering phrase with another instrument in L would be nice.
Might wanna put more melodies on at the same time near the end as well.

newvoyage responds:

Sweet, I'm glad you like it, you have some really good ideas with the panning, I wish I could edit these songs, but I am using the demo version of FL because I'm poor, actually I haven't used panning in any of my songs yet, something I will think about in making my next song.

[Randomology]

may as well join the band wagon...

Check out my stuff too! Wait..i know you. You already have. Thanks for that!

Anyway you might want to not just use a kik drum the whole way cause that got a bit boring. Also the automation of envelopes brings life to your song- can't to enough of that so do more of that. Needs more instruments if you're gonna refine it also.
And I think at hte moment Randomology is a good name.

[I've lost my sheep]

i think

that your strings need a LITTLE slower onset and a LITTLE longer decay time to make them perfect. Maybe more reverb. That's all.

[Depthless]

hm.

but the drums were not the main thing i noticed. I was listening to all the other instruments like those discordant bells which were good. Well if its just for your practice with drums, you get um, 7. For the rest of it I give you 9. Just automate a few more envelopes?

Plutomium666 responds:

thanks for the good review man!
like you said, i was just mucking around.

[[AD] Gore Addiction]

heyyyyyy

Simple but it combined brutality with sadness very nicely like all the others said. The different drum beats behind the same guitar riff really copletely changed the feeling of the audio- weird how a simple thing like that did so much! This would go well with some war game....
You just might wanna have a tweak to perfect the mixing though.
That's all.

[glitch bitch]

sweet

glitch is good, but the only thing that disappoints me is the lack of melody. Your gliching in itself was flawless, I'd just suggest giving it some off- beat beats to make it more unexpected if you know what im sayin cause idk what im sayin.

snayk responds:

Thanks for the review!

I'm actually new to glitch... I always wanted to try it, but I never quite knew where to start, so I've been experimenting. I know exactly what you're talking about when you mention the off-beat beats; I think that's absolutely crucial to glitch, and I suppose it's where I lack the most.

There is a lack of melody, but that's because I tend to get obsessed with beats and playing them over and over. I tried out different melodies for this song, but I nothing really worked with it (besides what I left it), so I decided to keep it like it is.

Thanks again! Good to hear you enjoyed it.

[Greensleeves]

sok

but use more dynamics and the string lead didn't sound goodd with the high frequencies and wasn't sure if the bass hrmonised correctly with them at some times. Maybe make your own one.

himenow responds:

Erm...check out my other...songs...
Any one... ;D
Then tell me that I should make my own :(

[This is the glitchy shit]

nice

Very glitchy- did you use dblue glitch for this? I just got it and still have to learn it :P Would like to hear the whole thing

[Valley of the damned]

very good song

just get your friend to put more guts in his singing, deep in the belly breathing cause it made me laugh

Nightwasp responds:

Thanks for the comment. Yes...it makes me laugh also

[f]

f............

play this to someone for a few f'in hours they would go insane. Good novelty piece

Heil responds:

oh k