Deathkavaderva's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Killing the Titanic]

man...

why couldnt this be played in the credits for Titanic........

DoogleFlip responds:

Because I hadn't written it when it came out :P

[Random Notes]

genius

in random noted 2, i suggest inserting random tempo changes at about 600-10000 bpm to bring out the emotion in the song.

DoogleFlip responds:

Thanks for the idea...watch out for it soon...

[Eros Club]

mate

listened to a few of your stuff, and its rally good man! how can you not be getting moar reviews and stuff?

Krupinkin responds:

I am very disapointed on that.... anyway, if one of 100 people like it, I am happy!

[Firebanesword's Techno Theme]

got some energy

drums are good, they're kinda crazy and variate well. The fluency of the music can be improved though. Ways to do this are to add reverbs on some tracks that stick out at times like the lead to make it flow smoother. And then come up with a clear structure with a recurring theme and verses, and near the end, a climax or something. what the guys below said i agree with. and sure, we can be cyber buddes if you like.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/141780
my new song. njoy, and i hope you found that helpful.

firebanesword responds:

Reverb. Fluency. Structure. Climax. I'll work those into my song I'm working on right now. Thank you.

[Thor (remastered)]

...yep.

agree with those two guys. This isn't techno. I have no idea what this is. The main theme is pretty good, but in the bits in between the lead just seems to go all over the place. If the verses were a little more ordered then it would sound better.
But better than the first. check out my stufff if you have the time
btw, I think this may have been attacked by 0 voters.

whitefire05 responds:

thx i agree i dunno what style this is either.. i play jazz tho and a lot of that kind of spilled over into this..(not always working) but yea thx and i liked ur stuff too

[I am Thor]

i liked it

well it certainly deserves better then that crappy rating. Good tunes and shit its just a bit mudddy or something if instruments had more diverse spots in the panning spectrum itd be less cluttered
sry im a little tired

whitefire05 responds:

no prob i didnt rly master this song i just impatient and posted it lol

[-+Windchimes+--*]

pretty nice

A bit repeditive, but the sounds you used were very trippy. Comes in with a nice, driving beat later on that ties it together more. What I would suggest for when you extend it is a change or two in chord progressions and beats, which would escalate the listener's interest.
-deathkavaderva-

[Cobalt Blue Sphere]

this is quite beautiful

Sweet groove, great chord progressions and emotions. Like below said, it gives a deep sense of sadness but with an underlying feeling of hope. I feel like I'm floating underwater listening to this. It gradually builds up and holds the listener's attention very well. The only thing I can say against it is at 2:47 those vocals that come in didn't seem to fit there for a second. But that's not worth taking a point off for. This deserves the top 50 more than most of the crap on ng. Well done, you've moved me.
-deathkavaderva-

[Sunken Ship]

nice

got good melody, sounds like the title and everything which is good. The negatives for me are that in some parts it cracked in my head phones the mixing is a bit loud. Maybe try for some compression? Also I would have liked it better with some more percussion toward the end. peace

Zeke30695 responds:

Thanks, glad you liked it, I must agree with the loudness at times, its mainly the cause of Poizone's sound, which also added the swish noise, I will take what you said and put them into a more updated version of this song when I get the chance.

[RGH: Badass Showdown(Film)]

returning the favour

This has been rated too low imo.... really it has.
yep. This is actually a badass showdown. I can see it all in my head.
Staring at eachother in the eye calmly seconds before they're about to rip into eachother with bullets....
Not speaking of effects put on it, it's fairly simple, and that's why I think it would work well in a flash, the tension slowly builds which is good and it loops well.
The drums at the start-- they got a bit of delay on em? Ah well suits. Can't really think of anything to criticise.
peace

RyeGuyHead responds:

simplicity is what drives background music, glad I painted a picture for you, although take out the guns and put in swords, then you've got the film idea down.

The drums do have delay, sound more foreboding that way