Deathkavaderva's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[eightthirtyoeight]

not bad

you seem to be good at these funkeh sax music. pretty good just for messing around, it might go well with a game menu or something in the backgrounds. could you plz review my song DV= Dark Room b4 i deletes it? thx in advance bruvva

TimeBender responds:

i checked and it wasn't there. which sucks.

[Into the pit [unfinished]]

great ambient track

reminds me of picture i saw of the hiroshima victims
freaky and disturbing

if you wanna finish it, im thinking you could put in a slow bassy cresc toward teh end at the end of wich the whole song convulses in an ugly way and then dies. thats jus a thought

check out my sone "eyes of the waiting" if you have time.... its also creepy

mrpibbs1 responds:

Hey man thanks for the review. I will check your song out now!

[Current Of the Night]

ncie

sounds pretty haunting, especially while reading your poetic authour comment
so this is what i propose as an idea
you record your voice saying that and put it over the song with some gentle reverbs or something would add to the emotion of it.
and make it longer because something thats good like this should be imho
-Deathkavaderva

SaintMalign responds:

Hehe, this song is totally about me having sleeping problems so I hope my little paragraph didn't make me come off as creepy :P

StM

[Flaming Eagle]

heh you know whats funny

ive heard this like, 2 days ago and almost reviewed it askin YOU to listen to my song. and that bitch swirly helix! he stole my phrase "smooth as PISS" when i reviewed his thing. serious. since for some reason my browser is fucking up and not playing this atm, from memory i can tell you this was as BRUTAL AS A FUCKIN BLOODY DIARHOREEA or how ever you spell it

mrpibbs1 responds:

Oh wow thanks man! I'll have to check out some of your stuff soon.
Thanks for the review bro

[Grey Skys Turn Green]

idea?

that lead that comes in at :38 would sound nicer with panning, like if it drifts from one ear 2 the other continuously. thats just an idea i get from hearing this. its a little loud, but the song still sounds cool. could have a better ending though. nice beats.

Juleye responds:

i really havent played around with panning at all. ive pretty much completely overlooked that. i think i'll try to utilize that in future tracks

[Grand Naivety]

sweet

at the beginning its kinda slow but @ 40:00 when the sax comes in everything is smooth as piss. the beats are seamless with all the other sounds. another 30 seconds and i would have had time to cream :( oh well some other time maybe. gotta love dnb jazz.

TimeBender responds:

YESYESYES!

I'm glad you liked it, spent quite the hours just making it sounds real. :D:D

[Sun Chaser]

imho

i dont usually listen tto or make this kind of music so i cant really say much, but i can say it sounds cool and has catchy tune, all the sounds work well together. i reckon the score deserves to be more like a 4 something than a 2 somethin so i voted 5 (3.02 / 5.00 (+ 0.14)

peace

cbasstn responds:

Thanks a lot!

[DJD - A 2nd Dawn]

agree with below 100%

because there isnt a definite form to the song (intro, main theme, breakdown, theme again etc) the whole thing will end up sounding like a big long intro and won't get anwhere. not using presets and all them fl drum samples like everyone else will give your music a unique sound which is better. One thing to add: in the bit where the snare comes in the beats seem random and should probably hold a stronger rhythm. i no i do that sometimes with drums. so its not bad but can be made much better.
-Deathkavaderva

cullum14 responds:

yeh cheers, i c wat u mean

[Plugins]

im intrigued

i always thought that the most important part of music is to inspire some sort of emotion in the listener. i found this song calming, yet uplifting and inspiring. some of the bassy notes were too heavy tho and i wasn't too hot for the way the volume raised again at the end but apart from that it was real good. check out my ambient stuff if you have the time. i hope you'll submit more stuff to ng.

fredtherealist responds:

I'll take that into consideration - thanks for the review buddy.

[Adapt to the Horde (vocals)]

fuck

Really well arranged and shit with everything. great riffs and drums. Great lyrics, they seem to have meaning and flow well and shit. the singing is also good but would sound better louder cause they get drowned out. I think the whole thing would sound better louder.
apart from that, it's pretty fucking awesome tho.

TwilightNecrosis responds:

Yeah, man, EternalReich is the shit. The dude's a fucking genius. The entire song is his, he even wrote the lyrics, all I did was record them.
I'll be sure to fix the loudness issue when I get a chance, too.
Thanks for the review.
Metal forever!